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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Monday, 7 December 2020

Catching the Sun

We have been learning about narrative writing. We rewrote a story called Catching the Sun. Here is my story.

Catching the Sun

 Re-told Khloe 

Long, long ago there were three animals and one man. His name was Sayday and there was a Fox named Max. There was a Deer that is named Maggie. There was a Magpie named Lisa. The animals had a problem because the sun only shines on one side of the world. They said to Sanyday that it is too dark. Sanyday  said to the animals, “who can run the furthest?” Fox said that he can run far. Deer said that he can run far too but not further than Fox. Magpie said that he can go fast too but he can’t run as fast as deer and Fox. So Fox ran to the sun people. Fox was looking at the sun people they had big stabby things and were playing with the sun like a ball.

Fox played with the sun people and he distracted the sun people and grabbed the sun to pass to Deer. Deer gave it to Magpie. Magpie  passed it to Saynday. The sun people had gone so far away that they couldn't see the animals. Saynday put the sun up but it was too hot so Saynday threw the sun up, up into the sky. They were happy and they all lived happily ever after.


Monday, 2 November 2020

Grandparents Writing

We have been learning to use Descriptive Language in our Writing. We wrote about our Grand parents for Great & Grands day.


Thursday, 24 September 2020

Creating a Game.

 This week we to end our procedure writing topic we have been creating our own game.I made a maze game.My theme was toxic scary lab.

Thursday, 10 September 2020

procedure writing

  we have been lerning how to do a procedure writing.



Friday, 28 August 2020

Cross Counrty

 


Yesterday we had cross country I came in 8th place . Here is my recount.

Friday, 7 August 2020

Persuasive writing

Today we have listened to a story called Rufus goes  to school. We had to decide if the Principal should let Rufus comes to school with reasons.

Friday, 31 July 2020

Persuasive Writing

Today we read a story. We had to decide if the Pigeon could drive the bus. 

Friday, 3 July 2020

Diamante Matariki poam

For our learning about Matariki we had to write a diamante poem. We have used nouns, adjectives and verbs to make our poem.

Telling the time

We have been learning to tell the time in class. I have made a DLO to show how to tell the time.

Friday, 19 June 2020

Rocket poems

For writing we had to write an acrostic poem and a shape poem about rocket. We had to use descriptive language.
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Friday, 29 May 2020

Bubble Writing

This week we played with bubbles. We blew bubble outside. Mrs Clarke had some really big bubbles. We use juicy words to write a piece of writing. Here is my work.

Friday, 22 May 2020

Hand washing Procedure

This week we have refreshed our leaning about how to wash you hands effectively. We completed a procedure to show the steps. Here is my writing I also designed my own germ.

Monday, 11 May 2020

DNA monster

Today I made a monster it has shapes on it here is it.

Friday, 24 April 2020

Wind by Khloe

Yesterday I wrote a story about wind. Here is a photo about wind

Wednesday, 8 April 2020

Writing

Today I made a story about Easter it has picture on it.

Tuesday, 17 March 2020

Writing

Here is some writing I did in class it is a poem called this is just to say.

Friday, 1 November 2019

Greats & Grands Day 2019

Last Friday we had our Greats & grands  Day.  my poppa came along. we did performances  and dancing. we had a delicious morning tea and played games. here is my poem

 I wrote for my grandparent.

Friday, 6 September 2019

Musical Instrument

We made Instruments out of recycled materials.  I made a shaker.  I made my instrument using pop corn seed and a cup. I  glued news paper on it and I painted it.

Here is a photo of my shaker.

Friday, 9 August 2019

Speech Writing

For the last two weeks we have been working on writing speeches.
My topic was rubbish.
We had to present them in front of our class.
I think I done well with my speech because I knew lots about my topic.

Here is my speech.

Have you thought that people have been leaving rubbish  around on earth? I have! Rubbish is anything that people throw away that isn’t important. When you see rubbish rolling on the ground then pick it up and put it in the bin because it is bad four our environment.

Firstly rubbish is bad for oceans animals. If sea animals like dolphins or fish eat the rubbish, like plastic bags, they will get sick and they might die.  So pick up any rubbish you see so it doesn’t blow into the sea and be good kiwis.

Next, rubbish is very bad for the farm animals.  Cows can mistake rubbish for food and eat it. They can choke on it or die. Farmers get mad when they see rubbish on their farm and that their animals are dying.

Finally you shouldn’t throw rubbish out your window  because it makes our environment looks messy.  On windy days rubbish swirls around and rolls  into the drains. This will eventually end up in our rivers and oceans. So please don’t throw your rubbish out the window put it in the rubbish bin.

So if you see rubbish on the side of the road, pick it up and put it in the rubbish bin. If everybody did this everyday for the whole year and were good all the time we would save our animals and our environment. That’s why we need to pick up the rubbish and be good kiwis and did you Know that  the animals will eat the rubbish and they will get sick and might dic and you don ‘t    hrit our animals  and you don ‘t want the anls do you. Please don‘t throw rubbish out of your window and be nice to the animals  and save the world. By Khloe White

Friday, 5 April 2019

What's behind the rock?

Today we wrote poems about living things. We had to use an adjective, noun and verb. Here is my published poem.